Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is true, Ms. [Name]!
It\'s a sumptuous dish, and my country has a lot to offer because it\'s the home of various seafood. We\'re fortunate to be able to consume even a platter of these mouth-watering seafood cooked in different ways. Great thoughts! See you!
~Teacher Eunice
I like eating seafood and I sometimes go eating out seafood.
>>> I like eating seafood, and I sometimes eat out looking for seafood.
The reason I like eating seafood is that I feel less guilty for eating seafood than eating meat.
>>> Correct!
As you know, many people constantly care about their health and weight.
>>> Correct!
I think that eating seafood is much better for health and weight than meat.
>>> Correct!
Most of all, seafood is delicious!
>>> Correct!
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