HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thanks for answering our essay question for tonight.
Your essay is exceptional as usual and I\'m so proud of you. ^^
I think your brain has gone on a resting mode and I think that\'s fine considering the amount of stress that you experience at work on a daily basis.
Don\'t worry. You can make up for it in class tomorrow. ^_~
Your sample sentence for \"smoking\" was great and you\'re right about your explanation. Good job! ^^
Take a rest and have a wonderful night.
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Why can\'t I remember when I\'m not tired..? T_T
>> Why can\'t I remember when I\'m not tired? T_T
I\'ve prepared a sentence.
>> CORRECT!
There is a smoking area on B1.
>> CORRECT!
I think is an adjective because \"is\" a verb of Be and \"smoking\" is in front of \"area\". Is that right?
>> CORRECT!
>> I think it is used as an adjective because \"is\" a be-verb and \"smoking\" is in front of \"area\".
Is that right?
I hope you have a comfortable evening. :)
>> CORRECT!
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< Are social networking sites good for our society? Why or why not?>
SNS is already deeply in our society.
>> SNS are already deeply rooted in our society.
I personally don\'t manage because it\'s hard to care.
>> CORRECT!
But we can use it to find lost items and experience difficult things in advance.
>> CORRECT!
This means that there are certain advantages.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s hard to say good or bad now that it\'s a necessity for modern people.
>> It\'s hard to say whether it is good or bad now that it\'s a necessity for modern people.
However, the key is how to use it.
>> CORRECT!
Appropriate use can be poisonous or beneficial.
>> CORRECT!
Blocking of harmful sites is necessary.
>> CORRECT!
Continuing education is also necessary.
>> CORRECT!
Modern society is convenient, but there are more things to deal with than before.
>> The modern society experiences convenience, but there are more things to deal with than before.
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