HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ Why can't I remember when I'm not tired..? T_T I've prepared a sentence. There is a smoking area on B1. I think is an adjective because "is" a verb of Be and "smoking" is in front of "area". Is that right? I hope you have a comfortable evening. :) ---------------------- <Are social networking sites good for our society? Why or why not?> SNS is already deeply in our society. I personally don't manage because it's hard to care. But we can use it to find lost items and experience difficult things in advance. This means that there are certain advantages. It's hard to say good or bad now that it's a necessity for modern people. However, the key is how to use it. Appropriate use can be poisonous or beneficial. Blocking of harmful sites is necessary. Continuing education is also necessary. Modern society is convenient, but there are more things to deal with than before.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thanks for answering our essay question for tonight. 

Your essay is exceptional as usual and I\'m so proud of you. ^^

I think your brain has gone on a resting mode and I think that\'s fine considering the amount of stress that you experience at work on a daily basis. 

Don\'t worry. You can make up for it in class tomorrow. ^_~

Your sample sentence for \"smoking\" was great and you\'re right about  your explanation. Good job! ^^

Take a rest and have a wonderful night.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Why can\'t I remember when I\'m not tired..? T_T

>> Why can\'t I remember when I\'m not tired? T_T
I\'ve prepared a sentence.

>> CORRECT!

There is a smoking area on B1.

>> CORRECT!
I think is an adjective because \"is\" a verb of Be and \"smoking\" is in front of \"area\". Is that right?

>> CORRECT! 

>> I think it is used as an adjective because \"is\" a be-verb and \"smoking\" is in front of \"area\".

Is that right?
I hope you have a comfortable evening. :)
>> CORRECT! 
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< Are social networking sites good for our society? Why or why not?>

SNS is already deeply in our society.

>> SNS are already deeply rooted in our society.
I personally don\'t manage because it\'s hard to care.

>> CORRECT! 
But we can use it to find lost items and experience difficult things in advance.

>> CORRECT! 
This means that there are certain advantages.

>> CORRECT! 
It\'s hard to say good or bad now that it\'s a necessity for modern people.

>> It\'s hard to say whether it is good or bad now that it\'s a necessity for modern people.
However, the key is how to use it.

>> CORRECT! 
Appropriate use can be poisonous or beneficial.

>> CORRECT! 
Blocking of harmful sites is necessary.

>> CORRECT! 
Continuing education is also necessary.

>> CORRECT! 

Modern society is convenient, but there are more things to deal with than before.

>> The modern society experiences convenience, but there are more things to deal with than before.

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