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2018-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Why is English fluency significant for you? A1: Well..Basically it's for effective communication.in my case, I love to meet some people who come from other countries and learn different cultures. To do these, I have to communicate with these people. English is a common launguage in the world. If i was good at english, i can talk about deep topic and well know each other. So that's why it is important for me to speak english well. A2:Well.. Simply it's for good communication. besides, i will meet lots of people from diffrent countries working this job (cabin crew). It's really important to communicate with passengers. if i was good at english, i can give them careful service. So that's why english fluency is signficant for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Moon! I appreciate your effort for answering this and sending it in. English is indeed the international language. Which ever country you are from, to be able to communicate with foreigners you have to speak English. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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Why is English fluency significant for you?

A1: Well..Basically it\'s for effective communication.

>>> Well, it\'s basically for effective communication.  

in my case, I love to meet some people who come from other countries and learn different cultures.

>>> OR:  In my case, I love meeting people who come from different countries and learning different cultures.  

To do these, I have to communicate with these people.

>>> CORRECT.  

English is a common launguage in the world.

>>> CORRECT.  

If i was good at english, i can talk about deep topic and well know each other.

>>> If I were good at English, I could talk about deep topics and get to know each other well.  

So that\'s why it is important for me to speak english well.

>>>  OR: That is why it is important for me to speak English well. 



A2:Well.. Simply it\'s for good communication.

>>> Well, it\'s simply for good communication.  

besides, i will meet lots of people from diffrent countries working this job (cabin crew).

>>> Besides, I will meet lots of people from different countries while working in this job as a cabin crew.  

It\'s really important to communicate with passengers.

>>> CORRECT. 

if i was good at english, i can give them careful service.

>>> If I were good at English, I could provide them with better service. 

So that\'s why english fluency is signficant for me.

>>> OR: That is why English fluency is significant for me.    

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