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2018-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Why is honesty so difficult at times? Being honest is generally treated as something nice. Because it is easy to moderate with others when others are honest. We can trust what others honestly said. However, sometimes the issue is not moderation, but a competition. People sometimes encounter important games in their lives,which makes people to seek a diversity of ways to win. In result, people start being dishonest to get what they want. All else equal, it is highly difficult for honest one to win dishonest one. Therefore, people hesitate when they choose whether to be honest in many decisions.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jacob!

Have a wonderful weekend, I\'ll see you on Monday! ~~

- Blair

Being honest is generally treated as something nice. Because it is easy to moderate with others when others are honest. We can trust what others honestly said. However, sometimes the issue is not moderation, but a competition. People sometimes encounter important games in their lives,which makes people to seek a diversity of ways to win. In result, people start being dishonest to get what they want. All else equal, it is highly difficult for honest one to win dishonest one. Therefore, people hesitate when they choose whether to be honest in many decisions.

Being honest is generally treated as something nice. Because it is easy to moderate with others when they are honest. We can trust other people\'s words. However, sometimes the issue is not about moderation but a competition. People sometimes encounter important games in their lives, which makes people seek diversity of ways to win. As a result, people start being dishonest to get what they want. All else equal, it is highly difficult for honest one to win dishonest one. Therefore, people hesitate when they choose whether to be honest in many decisions.

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