HOMEWORK

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for diligently sending in your homework. Good job! This is quite surprising. I guess issues about women safety or welfare was a big concern in your school in the past hat led to this policy which benefits only women. However, I think they should be fair for both men and women. Is there any way students could address this concern, like in an open forum or school discussions?

- T. Beth

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Girls, who are attending to our school, are subject to welfare about resting space.

>>> Girls who are attending our school are subjected to welfare on resting space.

>>> OR: Women attending our school are subjected to a privilege on resting area.  

As this space has a lot of bed, Many girls go this space after lunch to take a rest.

>>> Many women go to this provided space after lunch to take a rest as it has a lot of beds.

>>> OR: Because this area has a lot of beds, many women got here after lunch to rest.   

But, In our school, it doesn\'t exist for boys.

>>> However, there is no such space provided for men.  

It is the same for boy to want to take a rest too.

>>> It is the same for men to want to take a rest too.

>>> OR: Men would also want to take a rest.  

I wonder why policy for boys don\'t exist in school...

>>> I wonder why this policy does not exist for men in my school.  

So, students of boys usually sleep on the desk in library.

>>>  So, male students would usually sleep on the desk in the library.  

after sleeping like this, they feel indigestion due to stooping the waist during nap.

>>> After sleeping like that, they feel indigestion due to a stooping position while taking a nap.   

I want school to make a policy that take care of boys\' welfare too.

>>> I want the school to create a policy that benefits male student\'s too.