homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I guess, this is an inspiring story of yours.
I admire you for this.
Thank you for sharing about this experience of yours.
Have a great day ahead!
_Teacher Dianne
Q: Write about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision, and explain what you did.
>> correct
A: When I was 19 years old, I had to difficult decision at the first time in my life. about go to university and go to work.
>> When I was 19 years old, I had a difficult decision to make for the first time in my life. It\'s about going to the university or going to work.
I really want to go to university but I didn\'t have enough money.
>> I really wanted to go to the university, but I didn\'t have enough money.
also, I have to earn some money for my family.
>> Also, I had to earn some money for my family.
as soon as graduated of highschool I started working.
>> As soon as I graduated from High School, I started working.
It makes too hard for me when I moved to new company interview
that\'s why I always anwser to that why i didn\'t go to university becuase it is not common situation in my generation.
>> When I moved to a new company, it was too hard for me to answer the interview question why I didn\'t go to university. Because it is not a common situation in my generation.
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