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2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Q: Write about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision, and explain what you did A: When I was 19 years old, I had to difficult decision at the first time in my life. about go to university and go to work. I really want to go to university but I didn't have enough money. also, I have to earn some money for my family. as soon as graduated of highschool I started working. It makes too hard for me when I moved to new company interview that's why I always anwser to that why i didn't go to university becuase it is not common situation in my generation.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I guess, this is an inspiring story of yours.

I admire you for this.

Thank you for sharing about this experience of yours.

Have a great day ahead!


_Teacher Dianne


Q: Write about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision, and explain what you did.
>> correct
A: When I was 19 years old, I had to difficult decision at the first time in my life. about go to university and go to work.

>> When I was 19 years old, I had a difficult decision to make for the first time in my life. It\'s about going to the university or going to work.
 I really want to go to university but I didn\'t have enough money.

>> I really wanted to go to the university, but I didn\'t have enough money.
 also, I have to earn some money for my family.

>> Also, I had to earn some money for my family. 
 as soon as graduated of highschool I started working. 

>> As soon as I graduated from High School, I started working.
 It makes too hard for me when I moved to new company interview
that\'s why I always anwser to that why i didn\'t go to university becuase it is not common situation in my generation.

>> When I moved to a new company, it was too hard for me to answer the interview question why I didn\'t go to university. Because it is not a common situation in my generation.

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