HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ It's Monday, but I'm energetic. Thank you for your encouragement. ^^ I hope there will be warm sunshine in your area. :) ★Should we always tell the truth? Why or why not? There is a saying that it is a white lie in Korean. It means a lie in a good sense. When I was young, I thought lying was a bad thing. But I lied...^^; However, as I grew older, I met various situations and people and times. Then I realized that I was wrong. For example, I say that the food made by the other person tastes good even if it doesn't taste good. In a way, it can be seen as polite. But everything should be fair and I also need to tell the truth when I need it. Again, the key to everything is moderation.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for writing this awesome essay!

I\'m glad to know that you are not feeling tired right now.

You also deserve to take a rest. :)
Please continue writing and continue making great essays.

See you again tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
It\'s Monday, but I\'m energetic.

>> CORRECT!
Thank you for your encouragement. ^^

>> CORRECT!
I hope there will be warm sunshine in your area. :)
>> CORRECT!
★Should we always tell the truth? Why or why not?
There is a saying that it is a white lie in Korean.

>> There is a saying known as \"white lie\" in Korean.
It means a lie in a good sense.

>> CORRECT!

When I was young, I thought lying was a bad thing.

>> CORRECT!
But I lied...^^;

>> But I lied. ^^;
However, as I grew older, I met various situations and people and times.

>> However, as I grew older, I met various situations, people, and times.
Then I realized that I was wrong.

>> CORRECT!
For example, I say that the food made by the other person tastes good even if it doesn\'t taste good.

>> CORRECT!

In a way, it can be seen as polite.

>> CORRECT!
But everything should be fair and I also need to tell the truth when I need it.

>> CORRECT!
Again, the key to everything is moderation.

>> CORRECT!

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