HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for writing this awesome essay!
I\'m glad to know that you are not feeling tired right now.
You also deserve to take a rest. :)
Please continue writing and continue making great essays.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
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It\'s Monday, but I\'m energetic.
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Thank you for your encouragement. ^^
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I hope there will be warm sunshine in your area. :)
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★Should we always tell the truth? Why or why not?
There is a saying that it is a white lie in Korean.
>> There is a saying known as \"white lie\" in Korean.
It means a lie in a good sense.
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When I was young, I thought lying was a bad thing.
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But I lied...^^;
>> But I lied. ^^;
However, as I grew older, I met various situations and people and times.
>> However, as I grew older, I met various situations, people, and times.
Then I realized that I was wrong.
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For example, I say that the food made by the other person tastes good even if it doesn\'t taste good.
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In a way, it can be seen as polite.
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But everything should be fair and I also need to tell the truth when I need it.
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Again, the key to everything is moderation.
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