homework

Please tell me something about your neighbors. Who is your closest neighbor? Describe in as much detail as you can. MY closest neighbor is yoona.She and i live in a same apartment. Her floor is 7th and my floor is 13th. So we was able to meet easily. We have known each other since we were 8years old. Of course, She is one of my best friends. Although we are busy to study and cocentrate on our own works nowadays, i think we still get close each other. This year is really important for us.Because we will graduate university and should get new jobs. she wants to be a jounrnalist.Actually,she is really rational and seems to have a talent for writing. I really hope that she and i get a dream job in the future

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Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: Please tell me something about your neighbors. Who is your closest neighbor? Describe in as much detail as you can.

My closest neighbor is Yoona.

CORRECT!

or>>Yoona is my nearest neighbor.

She and i live in a same apartment.

>>She and I live in the same apartment building.

Her floor is 7th and my floor is 13th.

>>She lives on the 7th floor and I live on the 13th floor.

So we was able to meet easily.

>>So, we easily meet each other.

or>>So, we often see each other very easily.

We have known each other since we were 8 years old.

CORRECT!

or>>We met when we were only 8 years old.

Of course, She is one of my best friends.

>>Of course, she is one of my best friends.

or>>Also, she is one of my best pals.

Although we are busy to study and cocentrate on our own works nowadays, i think we still get close each other.

>>Nowadays, although we are both busy studying and concentrating on our own works, I think we still have time to bond with each other.

This year is really important for us.Because we will graduate university and should get new jobs.

>>This year is really important for us because we will graduate from university and have to find new jobs.

she wants to be a jounrnalist.

>>She wants to be a journalist.

or>>Her dream is to become a journalist one day.

Actually, she is really rational and seems to have a talent for writing.

CORRECT!

or>>In fact, she is very logical and seems talented enough when it comes to writing.

I really hope that she and i get a dream job in the future

>>I really hope that she and I will get each of our own dream jobs in the future.