Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Lucia!
First of all, I appreciate you giving your answers with the homework I gave. I\'m impressed with the sentences you came up with, as well as the words you used to complete them.
Here\'s something I want to share with you. What I\'ve learned through the years is that, when you want to become better and you would like to overcome your weakness, you should learn to take a step forward. I studied hard and pushed myself to practice what I learned even if sometimes I felt nervous.
Lucia, when you decided to study English, you already took that step. I know that you can make it. I know that it\'s not easy to let go of the personality you were used to overnight. But little by little, I know that you\'ll find yourself confident and proud in having conversations with others especially with foreigners soon.
Remember: Don\'t hesitate to speak and practice using English. If you encounter some mistakes while doing so, that\'s okay since it is part of your learning process. What\'s important is once it is corrected, you learn from it. And, I\'m always here to help you out. Don\'t hesitate to ask me for help. ^^
You can do it!
~Teacher Gina
To speak one’s personality i am timid and repress my accent
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: To tell you about my personality, I am shy and I suppress my accent.
>> Or: To tell you about my personality, I am shy and I keep my accent under control.
So i want to speak fluently
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: That\'s the reason why I want to speak fluently.
The europeans i saw were confident and cheerful
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I saw confident and cheerful Europeans.
I was born in korea but if l was born and raised in europe
I wonder if my personality has changed
>> I was born in Korea but if I was born and raised in Europe, I wonder if my personality was changed.
>> Or: I was born in Korea but I wonder if my personality is different now if I was born and raised in Europe.
>> Or: I wonder if my personality is different now if I was born and raised in Europe instead here in Korea.
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