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Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this. So to sum it up, the three things you need in life are parents, friends and a good partner. I agree that all of these matter a lot. I believe that in order to live a good life, having a good relationship with people around us is necessary. We are indeed social beings. It means, we need other people to live. No man is an island, so they say. I hope you keep creating good relationships with people around you.  :)

- T. Beth

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I think the life is split to three steps.

>>> I think life is divided into three steps.

>>> OR: I think life has three stages.  

>>> OR: I think there are three stages in life.

The first step is a infancy.

>>> The first step is at infancy.

>>> OR: The first stage is infancy.   

In this time, we would need to be guarded by parents.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: In this stage, we would need to be guarded by our parents.  

parents are the first thing that I need in life.

>>> Parents are the first thing I need in life.

And, the second step is a period of growth.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: The second stage is adulthood. 

In this time, making friends play the vital role for our to construct the good identity.

>>> In this time, making friends play a vital role in constructing a good identity.

>>> OR: In this stage, making friends play a vital role in creating a good identity.  

Therefore, friends are the second thing for me to keep my life.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: Therefore, friends are the second thing I need to keep in life.  

Finally, the third step is a having good partner for a senior\'s period.

>>> Finally, the third step is having a good partner in your senior years.  

In order to spend the time on enjoying life, we must have a good partner.

>>> In order to spend an enjoyable time in life, we must have a good partner.

After our children leave the own house, we need the partner against that we can lean.

>>> After our children leave home, we need a partner who we can lean on. 

Partner is the last thing for me to share experiences in old age.

>>> A partner is the last thing I need for me to share my experiences with later in life.