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2018-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy tuesday.Thank you so much ^^ You always give me an encouragement. To study English with you is a slight happiness. I think that one who dreams for a long time finally resembles her dreams. See you next class and have a wonderful day^^ 1. I have got a tortoise. _It___ is my tortoise. I keep _it___ in a cage. 2. Nick is in the garden. Can you see him____? He is playing with his____ dog. 3. I've forgotten my pen at home. Can I borrow one of this____, please? 4. We are German. But _Our___ English teacher can also talk to __us__ in English. 5. Jenny and Sally are in the house. They____ are listening to music with their phones. 6. You have got a new bike. Is this your____ bike? Do you drive _it___ to school? 7. Who is that girl over there? Do you know her____? 8. The Scotts have got a house. This is _his___ house. We can play in __his__ garden. 9. What did your brother say? Have you already talked to __him__? 10. He is a famous actor. You can watch _him___ new show on TV.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon once again Ms. [Name]. Always remember that no matter how hard the battle gets or no matter how many people don\'t believe in your dream, NEVER GIVE UP! I hope you will always put that in mind my dear.
Thank you for sending in your homework.
I will talk to you tomorrow.
T. Gracelyn

1. I have got a tortoise. _It___ is my tortoise. I keep _it___ in a cage.
>>correct
2. Nick is in the garden. Can you see him____? He is playing with his____ dog.
>>correct
3. I\'ve forgotten my pen at home. Can I borrow one of this____, please?
>>Can I borrow one of yours, please?
4. We are German. But _Our___ English teacher can also talk to __us__ in English.
>>correct
5. Jenny and Sally are in the house. They____ are listening to music with their phones.
>>correct
6. You have got a new bike. Is this your____ bike? Do you drive _it___ to school?
>>correct
7. Who is that girl over there? Do you know her____?
>>correct
8. The Scotts have got a house. This is _his___ house. We can play in __his__ garden.
>>This is their house. We can play in their garden.
9. What did your brother say? Have you already talked to __him__?
>>correct
10. He is a famous actor. You can watch _him___ new show on TV.
>>You can watch his new show on TV.

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