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The most interesting festival I have ever been to is apricot blossom festival in Yangsan.
>> The most interesting festival that I have ever been to was the apricot blossom festival in Yangsan.
It was a memorable festival because the blossoms had beautiful color and the shape was unique.
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The flowers looked simular to cherry blossoms, but the color spectrums were larger than cherry blossoms. I could also smell the sweet flower scent.
>> The flowers looked similar to cherry blossoms, but the color spectrums were larger than the latter. I could also smell the sweet flower scent.
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