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2018-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How should you fix your schedule to finish all your tasks? ==> I think it is very difficult to fix my schedule to finish all my tasks. Among of my tasks, I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber. The test takes 33 days for one test, so it needs very long time. Because of that we have to find some solution to decrease the test period. We are trying to find the method how we reduce the time in the environmental test. So I gave responsibility and authority to the part leader for resolution. He will think how to solve it. Like this way, I will share my tasks with my colleagues and solve the problem.

강사 첨삭

Hello, James! Thank you for doing your homework today. I was able to understand how complicated your tasks really are at work. I salute you for managing your time wisely. Anyway, check some corrections I made on your work. You did very well. It\'s impressive! Cheer up now!

-Klein-

 I think it is very difficult to fix my schedule to finish all my tasks.

>> I think that it is very difficult to fix my schedule to finish all my tasks.
 Among of my tasks, I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.

>>Among my tasks, I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.

>>One of my tasks is I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.
 The test takes 33 days for one test, so it needs very long time.

>>The test takes 33 days to complete, so it requires a very long time.
 Because of that we have to find some solution to decrease the test period.

>>Because of that we have to find a solution to decrease the test period.
 We are trying to find the method how we reduce the time in the environmental test.

>>We are trying to find a method on how to reduce the time used in the environmental test.
 So I gave responsibility and authority to the part leader for resolution.

>>So I gave responsibility and authority to the department head for a resolution.
 He will think how to solve it.

>>He will brainstorm how to solve it.
 Like this way, I will share my tasks with my colleagues and solve the problem.

>>Similar to this, I will share my tasks with my colleagues to help solve the problem.

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