Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello, James! Thank you for doing your homework today. I was able to understand how complicated your tasks really are at work. I salute you for managing your time wisely. Anyway, check some corrections I made on your work. You did very well. It\'s impressive! Cheer up now!
-Klein-
I think it is very difficult to fix my schedule to finish all my tasks.
>> I think that it is very difficult to fix my schedule to finish all my tasks.
Among of my tasks, I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.
>>Among my tasks, I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.
>>One of my tasks is I have to find acceleration factors when we do an environmental test in the chamber.
The test takes 33 days for one test, so it needs very long time.
>>The test takes 33 days to complete, so it requires a very long time.
Because of that we have to find some solution to decrease the test period.
>>Because of that we have to find a solution to decrease the test period.
We are trying to find the method how we reduce the time in the environmental test.
>>We are trying to find a method on how to reduce the time used in the environmental test.
So I gave responsibility and authority to the part leader for resolution.
>>So I gave responsibility and authority to the department head for a resolution.
He will think how to solve it.
>>He will brainstorm how to solve it.
Like this way, I will share my tasks with my colleagues and solve the problem.
>>Similar to this, I will share my tasks with my colleagues to help solve the problem.
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