HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for writing a beautiful sentence tonight.
It\'s really well thought of. ^^
I don\'t mind if you answer the homework yesterday. That\'s perfectly fine with me. :)
Your answer to the question was great.
I think the television nowadays is becoming a very effective tool in educating the public. :)
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a comfortable night too.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Today homework is the same as 16th, so I took the place of the 17th homework.
>> Today\'s homework is the same as the 16th, so I answered the homework for the 17th.
Is it okay?
>> CORRECT!
And I didn\'t hear exactly what you said.
>> In addition, I didn\'t exactly hear what you said.
That \"You don\'t borrow often, But when you borrow you paid it right away.\"
>> You said, \"you don\'t borrow often but when you borrow you pay it right away.\"
your said is correct.
>> What you said is correct.
I hope you have a comfortable night. :D
>> CORRECT!
★Which is better, television or books? Why?
When I was young, I liked both TV and books.
>> CORRECT!
But these days, I don\'t read books on the pretext of having e-books and have no times.
>> But these days, I don\'t read books on the pretext of having e-books and also because I have no time.
Nevertheless, I always watch TV.
>> CORRECT!
Because it\'s fun!
>> It\'s because it\'s fun!
When I watch TV, time goes so fast that I am always surprised.
>> CORRECT!
Nowadays, dramas are not common, so there are many things to watch.
>> CORRECT!
Documentaries about animals and nature are also very interesting.
>> CORRECT!
Surely watching TV is less thought than reading a book.
>> Surely, watching TV requires less thought/thinking than reading a book.
But I prefer TV to be honest.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, to be honest, I prefer to watch more.
From now on, I will watch less it for my health! ^^
>> From now on, I will watch less for my health! ^^
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