HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ Today homework is the same as 16th, so I took the place of the 17th homework. Is it okay? And I didn't hear exactly what you said. That "You don't borrow often, But when you borrow you paid it right away." your said is correct. I hope you have a comfortable night. :D ★Which is better, television or books? Why? When I was young, I liked both TV and books. But these days, I don't read books on the pretext of having e-books and have no times. Nevertheless, I always watch TV. Because it's fun! When I watch TV, time goes so fast that I am always surprised. Nowadays, dramas are not common, so there are many things to watch. Documentaries about animals and nature are also very interesting. Surely watching TV is less thought than reading a book. But I prefer TV to be honest. From now on, I will watch less it for my health! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for writing a beautiful sentence tonight. 

It\'s really well thought of. ^^   

I don\'t mind if  you answer the homework yesterday. That\'s perfectly fine with me. :)

Your answer to the question was great.

I think the television nowadays is becoming a very effective tool in educating the public. :)

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a comfortable night too.

See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Today homework is the same as 16th, so I took the place of the 17th homework.

>> Today\'s homework is the same as the 16th, so I answered the homework for the 17th.

Is it okay? 

>> CORRECT!
And I didn\'t hear exactly what you said.

>> In addition, I didn\'t exactly hear what you said.
That \"You don\'t borrow often, But when you borrow you paid it right away.\"

>> You said, \"you don\'t borrow often but when you borrow you pay it right away.\"

your said is correct. 

>> What  you said is correct.
I hope you have a comfortable night. :D
>> CORRECT!
★Which is better, television or books? Why?

When I was young, I liked both TV and books.

>> CORRECT!
But these days, I don\'t read books on the pretext of having e-books and have no times.

>> But these days, I don\'t read books on the pretext of having e-books and also because I have no time.
Nevertheless, I always watch TV.

>> CORRECT!
Because it\'s fun!

>> It\'s because it\'s fun!
When I watch TV, time goes so fast that I am always surprised.

>> CORRECT!
Nowadays, dramas are not common, so there are many things to watch.

>> CORRECT!
Documentaries about animals and nature are also very interesting.

>> CORRECT!
Surely watching TV is less thought than reading a book.

>> Surely, watching TV requires less thought/thinking than reading a book.
But I prefer TV to be honest.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, to be honest, I prefer to watch more.
From now on, I will watch less it for my health! ^^

>> From now on, I will watch less for my health! ^^

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