homework

2018-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What is your favorite restaurant? Talk about it in not more than FIVE (5) sentences. I like all restaurant that it is taste good. I like all food,so I don't know what I like favorite restaurants. But I like the restaurant of buffet. Because there are lots of food I like. I think I like the buffet.

강사 첨삭

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Thank you for your answers in today\'s homework. Please go over my corrections.
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~T. Kelly^^
What is your favorite restaurant? Talk about it in not more than FIVE (5) sentences. 
I like all restaurant that it is taste good.
>> I like all restaurants that serve delicious food.
I like all food,so I don\'t know what I like favorite restaurants.
>> I like all foods so I don\'t have a favorite restaurant.
But I like the restaurant of buffet.
>> But I like buffet restaurants.
Because there are lots of food I like.
>> Because there are lots of food that I like. 
I think I like the buffet.
>> So, I like buffet.

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