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Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this. Very well said. Shopping is really difficult sometimes. Especially when you have a lot of things to consider. I think focusing on only one factor could help. Good point!

P.S. It doesn\'t matter if you send it after few days. No need to rush. :)

- T. Beth

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When I would buy clothes, the first thing I consider is style.

>>>  CORRECT. 

Because I hate excessive consumption, I try to focus only on the style of cloth.

>>> Because I hate overspending, I try to focus only on the style of clothes.

>>> OR: I only focus on the style because I try to avoid over spending on clothes.  

While I would search clothes in internet, I can find stylish cloth not expensive.

>>> When I search for clothes online, I can find affordable yet stylish ones. 

>>> OR: When I search for clothes online, I can find stylish but affordable ones. 

Of course, clothes having a brand also exist stylishly.

>>> Of course, clothes with brands also are stylish.   

But, all clothes having a brand aren\'t exactly fashionable.

>>> However, all branded clothes are not always fashionable.  

Rather than, there is a situation that clothes not having a brand are more stylish than something to have a brand.

>>> As matter of fact, there are cases where clothes with no brand are more stylish than those that are branded. 

I think searching a our favorite cloth is the same with searching a pearl in huge oceans.

>>> I think searching for our favorite clothes is similar to searching for a pearl in wide ocean. 

So, I would concentrate on the style except the other factors.

>>> So, I would focus on the style more than other factors.  

I think when we abandon the other factor except something we must focus on, we can see something we need.
>>> I think if we abandon other factors except for one, we can easily see what we need.    
ps. sorry to relate...

>>> P.S. Sorry for sending it late.