HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
WRITING TASK!
~ What phone features would you like to be developed?
I think some phone features shoulde be developed.
First of all, there should be more natural oral ordering system.
Seconldy, translation function will be very useful.
강사 첨삭
This is true, Minji!
Some mobile applications like language translation can be very useful to us. Keep your ideas flowing!
~ Teacher Eunice
I think some phone features shoulde be developed.
>>> Correct!
First of all, there should be more natural oral ordering system.
>>> Correct!
Seconldy, translation function will be very useful.
>>> Secondly, the translation function will be very useful.
>>> OR: Secondly, the language translation function will be very useful to break the language barrier among people.
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