homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I appreciate your effort in making you homework. Good job! However, please take note of a few corrections I have made in your answers. Thank you very much! See you in our class! (^^,)
1. My favorite food is squid sashimi because it is bite feeling very good!
>>> My favorite food is squid sashimi because when I bite it, it feels very good!
>>> OR My favorite food is squid sashimi because it tastes good!
2. My favorite place is my home because I can reposefully rest here.
>>> My favorite place is at home because I can rest peacefully there.
>>> My favorite place is at home because I can rest well there.
3. My favorite subject in school is anatomical physiology because I can learn more about the human body.
>>> CORRECT!
-- TEACHER MICHELLE
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