Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I didn\'t know that you had a mischievous side.
Your story was really funny.
You described the situation clearly.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I can\'t remember the time that someone play tricks to me , so I will talk about the tricks I usally like to play.
>> I can\'t remember a time when someone played a trick on me , so I will talk about the tricks I usually like to play on other people.
There is an ice cream that the content is in the pack and pluged by the lid.
>> There is ice cream in a pack and sealed by a lid.
And when I eat it and the pack is empty, I blow the air inside to the pack to look like it is filled and plug the lid so the air can\'t get out.
>> After I eat it and the pack is empty, I blow air inside the pack to make it look like it is filled and seal the lid so the air can\'t get out.
Then I give the empty pack with the air inside to my friend saying \"This is for you, my friend! eat it.\" .
>> Then I give the empty pack with air inside to my friend saying \"This is for you, my friend! Eat it.\"
And when my friend found out that the pack is empty, I run away, teasing my friend that she is decived.
>> And when my friend finds out that the pack is empty, I run away while teasing my friend for being fooled.
It\'s really fun, actually.
>> Correct
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