HOMEWORK! ^^

Hi, [이름]! 

Thanks for writing a great essay even if the question was a bit difficult to answer. ^^

I felt sorry too because our class time was really short. I apologize for the power interruption.

Anyway, I would like you to know that you really did great in class and I\'m happy for it.

We have electricity now but I\'m not sure if there will be another power interruption later. T_T

I miss the sun too. I hope he shows up really soon. kkk.

Have a great night and rest well.

See you again on Friday. ^^

~Teacher Charry :)

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I was sorry because today\'s class was short. 

>> CORRECT!
I hope the power has been restored.

>> CORRECT!
I hope the sunshines in your area, too!

>> I hope the sun shines in your area, too!

 ★Are smartphones ruining our world? Why or why not?

Today\'s topic seems difficult.

>> CORRECT!
Because smartphones are now indispensable.

>> It\'s because smartphones are now indispensable.
However, based on happiness, there is something that ruins.

>> However, based on happiness, there is something that ruins it.
First, it puts strain on health such as eyes, wrists, etc.

>> First, it puts strain on our body such as our eyes, wrists, etc.
And when I was young, most of people did not have cell phones.

>> When I was young, most of people did not have cell phones.
So I called or went to their house directly.

>> CORRECT!
There were many things to talk to each other and to do together.

>> There were many things to talk about with each other and to do together.
But now, everyone has only smartphones in their hands.

>> CORRECT!
It\'s a bitter, but I can’t help it.

>> It\'s a bitter thing, but I can’t help it.
Sometimes I miss the affection between people.

>> CORRECT!