HOMEWORK

Hello Lucia!

How are you this Thursday? I hope you\'re doing fine. Thank you for submitting your homework. We just need to work on how you construct your sentences but I\'m impressed with some of the words you used on your homework. You seem to have a good foundation for your vocabulary. I\'m also happy that you provided long sentences. This is a good start. Keep it up, Lucia! ^^

By the way, if you have any questions about your homework or about the corrections, feel free to ask me on our next class. Okay? ^^

See you on Friday!

~Teacher Gina

1. My brother was born this world, I’m very happy

>> When my brother was born in this world, I was very happy.

>> Or: When my brother was born, I was very happy.

>> Or: I was very happy when my brother was born.

 2. Ride a bike on myself for the first time, I’m scary but after the time, I became get ridding to well so I felt proud
ever since A few month ago get ride on bike with my company college
at paldangdam by the way i’m ridding to bike fell down to be hurt
so i felt don’t conceit 

>> When I rode a bike alone for the first time, I was scared but after that I became better in riding it. That\'s why I felt so proud of myself ever since. A few months ago, I got to ride a bike with my company colleague at Paldangdam but the bike fell down and I was hurt. So I thought that I should not be conceited.

 3. Taiwan is my first time overseas trip. I’m nervous and flutter but I’m fine except the food for my taste
>> I went to Taiwan for my first overseas trip. I was nervous and fluttered but I was fine except for the taste of the food there.

 4. I was became twenty years old, I can drunk alcohol

>> When I became twenty years old, I can already drink alcohol.

 5. A few month ago my uncle was according to traffic accident so he was die. i’m very sad can’t expression

>> Few months ago, my uncle died due to a traffic accident. I was very sad that I couldn\'t express what I\'m feeling.

 6.last year i have been gloomy day so i’m read books self-improve
i felt impression from books and then i’m got better

>> Last year, there have been gloomy days for me so I read books for self-improvement.

I was inspired by those books then I felt better.

 7. The reason why I learned English is to teach foreigners the way. So I’m studying English currently from teacher Gina
I can’t forget this moment

>> The reason why I\'m learning English is to learn the way of how foreigners speak. So I\'m studying English currently from Teacher Gina. I will never forget this moment.