homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Jake!^^ Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a good job here!
Health is wealth as they say so we should really pay attention to what were putting inside our mouth. It\'s good to have a healthy body and to live a long life.
Enjoy the rest of the day! ^-^)
_T. Mayleen :)
When I hear the word \'healthy\' I concern about my health so I keep reminding to have healthy food, to do work out, and to sleep a lot.
>>> When I hear the word \'healthy\', it makes me conscious about my health so I keep reminding myself to have healthy food, to do work out, and to sleep a lot.
Because those activities can help to keep my body healthy.
>>> It\'s because those activities can help keep my body healthy.
Plus, the word reminds me my parents\' health.
>>> Also, the word reminds me of my parents\' health.
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