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2018-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> In line with our topic, what is something you have to do on a daily basis? I promise with myself that I must finish each one chapter in TOEFL reading book and TOEFL listening book everyday. So, I always listen to a one listening chapter before Skype for studying English. After that, I always read a one reading chapter. It is very hard to guard this appointment I pledge with myself. Sometime I feel that I don't want to keep this appointment or I think that It's okay to skip this appointment today. A lot of things usually allure me toward breaking that. However, the reason I can endure these temptations is that I always try not to regret result which come from breaking appointment. I'm really afraid of result after I didn't try to keep my appointment. I will choose trying to keep my appointment more than regretting later.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this one. I can totally relate to this one. It is really difficult to always keep the promises we made to ourselves. We come up with a lot of excuses sometimes. I guess having a great motivation is necessary to keep doing it diligently. We need to keep pushing ourselves to try harder. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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I promise with myself that I must finish each one chapter in TOEFL reading book and TOEFL listening book everyday.

>>> I promised myself that I must finish one chapter for each in TOEFL reading book and TOEFL audio book everyday.   

So, I always listen to a one listening chapter before Skype for studying English.

>>> So, I always listen to one audio chapter before studying English in Skype.   

After that, I always read a one reading chapter.

>>> After that, I always read one chapter for the reading book.    

It is very hard to guard this appointment I pledge with myself.

>>> It is very hard to fulfill this pledge I made with myself.

>>> OR: It is very hard to keep this promise I made to myself.   

Sometime I feel that I don\'t want to keep this appointment or I think that It\'s okay to skip this appointment today.

>>> Sometimes, I feel that I don\'t want to keep this schedule or I think that it\'s okay to skip it for today.    

A lot of things usually allure me toward breaking that.

>>> A lot of things usually lure me towards breaking that.

>>> OR: A lot of things distract me so I end up breaking that.   

However, the reason I can endure these temptations is that I always try not to regret result which come from breaking appointment.

>>> However, the reason I can endure these temptations is that I always try to avoid regrets which result from breaking my appointment.    

I\'m really afraid of result after I didn\'t try to keep my appointment.

>>> I\'m really afraid of the result after I didn\'t try to keep my appointment.

>>> OR: I\'m really afraid of the result after not trying to keep my appointment.

I will choose trying to keep my appointment more than regretting later.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: I will choose trying to keep my appointment rather than regretting it later.   

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