homework

Do you think a good education can help you get a good job? Why or why not? Please explain. yes, it can helps me get a good job. Since i was young, I have gotten good educations. For example, i learened playing a piano, taekwondo and swimming,art and so on. from this experience, i was able to have various experience. Futhermore i studied english and Newzealand'culture in Newzealand. I met a lot of people from another countries and experience their' culture. this makes me have broader horizons. So i belive that my experiences get from good education help me choose a good job!

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HOMEWORK: Do you think a good education can help you get a good job? Why or why not? Please explain.

yes, it can helps me get a good job.

>>Yes, it can help me get a good job.

Since i was young, I have gotten good educations.

>>Since I was young, I have gotten some good education.

For example, i learened playing a piano, taekwondo and swimming,art and so on.

>>For example, I learned how to play a piano, I get to do some sports like taekwondo and swimming, I studied art and so on.

from this experience, i was able to have various experience.

>>From this experience, I was able to have various experiences.

Futhermore i studied english and Newzealand\'culture in Newzealand.

>>Furthermore, I studied English and some of their cultures in New Zealand.

I met a lot of people from another countries and experience their\' culture.

>>I met a lot of people from other countries and experienced their varied cultures.

this makes me have broader horizons.

>>This broadened my horizon.

or>>This gave me a much broader horizon about so many things.

So i belive that my experiences get from good education help me choose a good job!

>>So, I believe that the experiences I acquired from having a good education will help me choose a good job!