Homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
WRITING TASK!
~ Where do you think is the safest place?
I believe that the safest place is my home.
No one except for my family can open the door, and my apartment is very secured.
Besides, I feel safe when I'm home too.
강사 첨삭
This is wonderful, Minji!
Our home is the safest haven for us. Great thoughts!
~Teacher Eunice
I believe that the safest place is my home.
>>> Correct!
No one except for my family can open the door, and my apartment is very secured.
>>> Correct!
Besides, I feel safe when I\'m home too.
>>> Correct!
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