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I would say to give up everything for exercise.
Everything is worth for living.
I often give up studying.
Making money is deserve to everything.
Doing computer programming is joyful sometimes.
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Jean
I would say to give up everything for exercise.
>> I would say that I am willing to give up everything for exercise.
Everything is worth for living.
>> Everything is worth living for.
I often give up studying.
>> I often give up on my studies.
Making money is deserve to everything.
>> People are willing to do everything to make money.
Doing computer programming is joyful sometimes.
>> correct
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