homework

2018-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

synonym 1. happy (pleased, delighted, content) -I am pleased I got the prize. -My father was delighed that I graduated. -Jeny content she pass in university 2. sad (unhappy, down, low) -I unhappy I break up with girlfriend -He down condition(he is to down condition?), because he is sick. -she is lowwer mood she has a falling grade. 3. angry (cross, mad, annoyed) -My mom was cross because I didn’t eat -She was mad because she failed the exam. -I got annoyed because my brother played joke to me make sentences 4. happy I am happy to eat. I think why the human should be happy. 5. sad He cry sadly. My dream is the nurse that take care of patients. but sadly I didn’t achieve my dream. 6. excited I am excited because I go to the amusement park.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for taking some time to answer your homework today! Good job! Please take note of some corrections and suggestions for your sentences. have a good day! (^^,)


Synonym:
1. happy (pleased, delighted, content)

 -I am pleased I got the prize.

>>> I am pleased that I got the prize.


-My father was delighed that I graduated.

>>> CORRECT!

>>> OR Because I graduated, my father was delighted.


 -Jeny content she pass in university

>>> Jenny felt contentment when she passed the exams in the university.


 2. sad (unhappy, down, low)
-I unhappy I break up with girlfriend

>>> I am unhappy because I broke-up with my girlfriend.


-He down condition(he is to down condition?), because he is sick.

>>> He feels down because he is sick.


-she is lowwer mood she has a falling grade.

>>> She is in a low mood because she has a failing grade.


 3. angry (cross, mad, annoyed)
-My mom was cross because I didn’t eat

>>> My mom was cross with me because I didn\'t eat.
 

-She was mad because she failed the exam.

>>> CORRECT!

>>> She got mad when she failed the exam.


-I got annoyed because my brother played joke to me

>>> CORRECT!

>>> OR I was annoyed when my brother played joke to me.

 make sentences
4. happy
I am happy to eat.

>>> I feel happy when I eat.


I think why the human should be happy.

>>> I think about why human should be happy.

>>> OR I think about the reasons why human should be happy.


5. sad
He cry sadly.

>>> He cried sadly.


My dream is the nurse that take care of patients. but sadly I didn’t achieve my dream.

>>> My dream is to be a nurse who takes care of patients but sadly, I wasn\'t able to achieve it.


6. excited
I am excited because I go to the amusement park.

>>> I am excited because I will go to the amusement park.


--TEACHER MICHELLE

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