homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Synonym:
1. happy (pleased, delighted, content)
-I am pleased I got the prize.
>>> I am pleased that I got the prize.
-My father was delighed that I graduated.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR Because I graduated, my father was delighted.
-Jeny content she pass in university
>>> Jenny felt contentment when she passed the exams in the university.
2. sad (unhappy, down, low)
-I unhappy I break up with girlfriend
>>> I am unhappy because I broke-up with my girlfriend.
-He down condition(he is to down condition?), because he is sick.
>>> He feels down because he is sick.
-she is lowwer mood she has a falling grade.
>>> She is in a low mood because she has a failing grade.
3. angry (cross, mad, annoyed)
-My mom was cross because I didn’t eat
>>> My mom was cross with me because I didn\'t eat.
-She was mad because she failed the exam.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> She got mad when she failed the exam.
-I got annoyed because my brother played joke to me
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR I was annoyed when my brother played joke to me.
make sentences
4. happy
I am happy to eat.
>>> I feel happy when I eat.
I think why the human should be happy.
>>> I think about why human should be happy.
>>> OR I think about the reasons why human should be happy.
5. sad
He cry sadly.
>>> He cried sadly.
My dream is the nurse that take care of patients. but sadly I didn’t achieve my dream.
>>> My dream is to be a nurse who takes care of patients but sadly, I wasn\'t able to achieve it.
6. excited
I am excited because I go to the amusement park.
>>> I am excited because I will go to the amusement park.
--TEACHER MICHELLE
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