homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you always for doing your homework! I can tell that you are improving. Just be more mindful to use proper punctuations and capitalizations in your sentences. It makes a lot of difference in a sentence. Also, minimize using conjunctions like and, but and so to begin a sentence. They are usually used at the middle of a sentence to supplement an earlier idea at the same sentence. See below some corrections I made on your work. That\'s it for now. Happy weekend!
~Kelly
Hi kelly,
>> Hi Kelly,
First thank you for your advice.
>> First, thank you for your advice.
If i memorize and practice new word everyday, It will be influence to my writing skills.
>> If I memorize and practice a new word every day, it will help improve my writing skills.
And i never saw about claque word, So it feel little bit strangely meaning of me.
>> And I never encountered the word claque, so it feels a little strange for me to know its meaning.
But it is very interesting word.
>> But is a very interesting word.
Next week Thursday is my predecessor’s last day.
>> Next week, on Thursday, is my colleague\'s last day.
So i am very worry about that, how can i do work alone. because everyday has some issues and problem. but anybody don’t know how could resolve that problem.
>>So I am very worried about it. How can I do all the work alone? Everyday we have some issues and problems but nobody doesn\'t know how to resolve them.
But i already know only time is that solution.
>> But now, I already know a solution.
and everyday i practice to english, english skill also can be level up.
>> And every day I practice my English skills because my skills also help me to level up.
Please help and fix my sentences.
>> Please help by correcting my sentences.
I really hope to be a english master and easily make a sentence by business English.
>> I really hope to master my English communication skills and to easily make a sentences used in Business English.
Thanks
>> Thanks.
>> OR: Thank you.
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