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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this one. I appreciate your effort for explaining. Speaking English is indeed necessary if you want to enter the global market, because English is the international language. It\'s kind of sad to think that young people are forced to study English just for the reason of entering good universities and companies. Learning a language should be a choice or a fun experience. Lucky for me, I didn\'t have to force myself to study English because I was exposed to this language at a very young age. In the Philippines, English is our second language. We use English quite often in school and in public. We learn it naturally because of all these opportunities to be exposed to it.

- T. Beth

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There are two reason that most young people have a good English test score.

>>>  There are two reasons why most young people must have a good English test score.

The first reason is admission into universities which have a high grade in ranking of Korea\'s universities.

>>> The first reason is the admission into a university that has a high rank in Korea. 

Our high school students have to take a exam ,referred to \"Suneung\".

>>> Our high school students have to take an exam referred to as \"Suneung.\" 

>>> OR: Our high school students have to take an exam called \"Suneung.\" 

It have a English exam that was very difficult to me.

>>> I has an English exam that was very difficult for me. 

So, I would thought that if I did English very well, I could go to higher university than now.

>>> Therefore, I thought that if I was good in English, I could have gone to a higher ranked university than the one I attended.

(In Korea, university is so important that it can change the life of individual person more than anything.)

>>> (In Korea, the university you attend to is very important because it could change the life of an individual more than anything.) 

And, the second reason is about entering companies.

>>> In addition, the second reason is regarding entering companies. 

Our company look TOEIC score importantly.

>>> Our company takes TOEIC score into high consideration. 

So, Korean mothers let their children go to academy to study English since taking to kindergarten.

>>> Because of that,  Korean mothers send their children to English academies the moment they enter kindergarten.

Korean inevitably have to take a high score in English test in order to live in Korea.

>>> Koreans inevitably have to take a high score in English tests in order to live in Korea.