HOMEWORK! ^^

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for doing your homework!

I\'m really impressed with your essay because it was beautifully written and it was full of truth.

I do agree that obesity is a disease and it needs to be managed to prevent it from causing a cascade of diseases like atherosclerosis, heart attack, stroke and renal failure.

Maintaining a healthy lifestyle is the secret.

I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you later in class.^^

~Teacher Charry   

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
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The weekend is over!

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I slept only this week.

>> I only slept this week.

It seems like time has passed. 

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I\'ll see you tomorrow after I\'ve replenished my energy. :D
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★Is obesity a disease? Why or why not?

I searched for the meaning of obesity.

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It means fat and full.

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So I think the word itself means disease.

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It‘s because it is more than just average weight.

>> It‘s because it is having more than just the average weight.
Come to think of it, I used to be thin.

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However, I suddenly gained more than 10 kilograms while working.

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Therefore, I feel heavy, gasping, and sore joints.

>> Therefore, I feel heavy. I am always gasping, and I have sore joints.
It takes a lot of effort to get back to it now.

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I don\'t need to be very slim, but I think moderate weight is important.

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I am also trying not to gain weight because I‘m overweight.

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