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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I agree with you. The story plot really plays a big role in the success of a movie.  I enjoy action movies too. I also like horror films. They\'re fun! A horror movie with a good story is worth watching.

- T. Beth

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People are excited to a story that a main character in movie overcome unfortunate environment.

>>>  People are excited about a story where the main character in the movie overcomes an unfortunate event.  

Especially, when the story was arisen by real person, people are impressed with that.

>>>  Especially when the story is based from the life of a real person, people are impressed by that. 

So, I think what make a great movie is a touching story.

>>>  Therefore, I think what makes a great movie is a touching story.

Of course, there are many factors to affect the success of movies.

>>>  Of course, there are many factors that affect the success of movies.  

However, I think the most important factor among those is a story.

>>> CORRECT.   

Because I\'m a male, there is a tendency that I like action movies although those don\'t have stories.

>>>  Because I\'m male, there is a tendency that I like action movies although those do not have stories.

>>>  OR: Because I\'m male, there is a tendency that I like action movies although those do not have stories.

But, It doesn\'t mean that I\'m touched by these movies.

>>> Nonetheless, it doesn\'t mean that I\'m moved by these movies.   

These action movies are only pastime for me.

>>>  CORRECT. 

The movies which touched me always have a story that the main character help others although sacrificing oneself.

>>>   The movies that touched me always have stories where the main character help others although sacrificing oneself.