homework

2018-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I am reading a book at the moment. It is very interesting. The book I am reading at the momentis very interesting 2. You live in a town. The town is very old. The town you live in is very old. 3. The sweets are delicious. I bought them yesterday. The sweets I bought them yesterday are delicious. 4. The football match was very exciting. My friend played in it. The football match my friend played in was very exciting. 5. The letter hasn't arrived yet. The letter I posted three days ago hasn't arrived yet. . 6. He lives in a house. The house is not very big. The house he lives in is not very big. 7. They are playing a song on the radio. Do you like it? Do you like the song they are playing on the radio ? 8. Jane wore a beautiful shirt yesterday. Did you see it? Did you see the beautiful shirt Jane wore yesterday ? I'm sorry to do my homework late. In fact, I have just finihsed it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]h! Thanks for doing this homework. You did a good try to rewrite the sentences.

You can also add the word \"that\" to the sentences.

Example: The sweets I bought yesterday are delicious.

>> The sweets that I bought yesterday are delicious.

Talk to you again tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

1. I am reading a book at the moment. It is very interesting.
The book I am reading at the moment is very interesting

>> CORRECT
2. You live in a town. The town is very old.
The town you live in is very old.

>> CORRECT
 3. The sweets are delicious. I bought them yesterday.
The sweets I bought them yesterday are delicious.

>> The sweets that I bought yesterday are delicious.
 4. The football match was very exciting. My friend played in it.
The football match my friend played in was very exciting.

>> CORRECT
 5. The letter hasn\'t arrived yet. 
 The letter I posted three days ago hasn\'t arrived yet. .

>> CORRECT
 6. He lives in a house. The house is not very big.
The house he lives in is not very big.

>> CORRECT
 7. They are playing a song on the radio. Do you like it?
Do you like the song they are playing on the radio ? 

>> CORRECT
 8. Jane wore a beautiful shirt yesterday. Did you see it?
Did you see the beautiful shirt Jane wore yesterday ?

>> CORRECT



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