homework
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Does the weather affect your mood? How do gloomy days make you feel? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences
If it is raining when our family go to the outtraveling,I am gloomy.
But in the normal days I like raining like now.
And I hate it is very hot.
So,I annoyed every day in summer this year because it was so hot.
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Does the weather affect your mood? How do gloomy days make you feel? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences
If it is raining when our family go to the outtraveling,I am gloomy.
>> If it is raining and our family is travelling, I feel gloomy.
But in the normal days I like raining like now.
>> But I like rainy days.
And I hate it is very hot.
>> And I hate it if it\'s hot.
So,I annoyed every day in summer this year because it was so hot.
>> So, I feel annoyed every day in summer this year because it is so hot.
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