HOMEWORK! ^^

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for once again writing a beautiful essay.

I think you are enjoying the ASEAN Games. ^_^

I\'m happy to hear that your soccer teams are doing really great.

I hope you bring home a lot of gold medals. ^^

I think zoos should be closed and animal shelters should be started.

Instead of paying to see the animals, I think people should pay to help save them from extinction.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Yesterday, the men\'s soccer team won 4-3.

>> Yesterday, the men\'s soccer team won with a score of 4-3.
I was so happy, but today I felt bad for the women\'s soccer team 2-1.

>> I was so happy, but today I felt bad for the women\'s soccer team because they had a score of 2-1.
It hurt me even more because it was a self-titled goal, but all the players had a hard time!

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Actually, I haven\'t seen a basketball game with Philippines.

>> Actually, I haven\'t seen the basketball game with the Philippines.

But I\'m very sorry. 

>> CORRECT!
I hope that there will be a good result next time.

>> CORRECT!
I\'ll see you tomorrow.

>> CORRECT!

I hope you\'ll have a comfortable night. ^^
>> CORRECT!

 ★Should we ban zoos?

I have liked animals since I was young.

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I usually did not see well, so I had to see it at the zoo.

>> I usually did not see them often, so I had to see them at the zoo.
Especially in countries with many apartments like Korea. it is hard to see.

>> This is especially true in countries with many apartments like Korea. It is hard to see.
Of course, the condition is the best as it is.

>> [Do you mean]: Of course, they need the best living conditions.
However, if we pay attention to a few things, the zoo is not bad, either.

>> However, if we pay attention to a few things, the zoo is not bad either.
This is because we can protect extinct animals.

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Personally, I do not wish to ban it yet.

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It seems that it can only proceed if it is deliberately and thoroughly prepared.

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I am so sorry for the animal because of human selfishness.

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I want to live together and live well.

>> I want to live together with them and live well.