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Hello Jin Young. I appreciate the effort on sending this. Very well said. I agree that there are several factors that could lead to success. Grabbing chances are important. As they say, opportunities only knock ones. Maybe, maybe not. What matters is, we have to know when good opportunities come and make sure we take advantage of them. I hope you get a lot of good chances in life Jin. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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I think all people have three chances give those a success in their life.

>>> I think all people are given three chances for success in life.

>>> OR: I think all people are given three chances to succeed in life.    

But, we don\'t know when these chances come to us.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: However, we don\'t know exact when these chances will come to us.    

It is the reason why we need to have a decisive plan in order to achieve a goal when chances come to us.

>>> CORRECT.    

For example, these preparations on chances could include developing oneself\'s faculty, preparing some money, and keeping good relationship with friends so on.

>>>  For example, these preparations on those chances could include developing one\'s abilities, saving money, keeping good relationship with friends and so on. 

Chances come to person who prepare those.

>>> Chances come to the person who prepares those.    

>>> OR: Chances come to those who prepare these.

In addition, faculty catching these chances is important part in achieving a goal.

>>> In addition, the ability to grab these chances is an important  part in achieving a goal.   

This mean, it is important not only to prepare chances but also to catch those when it come to us.

>>> This means, it is not only important to prepare for those chances but also to grab them when they come to us.