Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I like the way you describe your likes and dislikes.
They are very clear and I hope you continue expressing yourself.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usally use brand MUJI.
>> I prefer the MUJI brand.
It\'s clothes and stuff\'s design is very simple, so my mom and I usally buy clothes at there.
>> The design of my stuff and clothes is very simple so my mom and I usually buy our clothes there.
But my sister doesn\'t like the disign of MUGI, so she always buy clothes from somewhere I don\'t know.
>> However, my sister doesn\'t like the designs of MUGI so she always buys clothes from somewhere I don\'t know.
And my wish is burn all her clothes.
>> I wish to burn all of her clothes.
If it\'s possible, I want to throw away her cosmetic.
>> If it\'s possible, I want to throw away her cosmetics, too.
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