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2018-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

"If you will have powers, what powers do you want to acquire? Why? " I will want to have super memory. because I make mistakes I forget every time of my memory. also my grades can improve.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for dropping by the board, [이름]!

Having a keen memory can help us become excellent in remembering things. Apparently, mistakes are inevitable, but we can definitely dwindle them. You were great, keep your ideas flowing!

~Teacher Eunice

I will want to have super memory. because I make mistakes I forget every time of my memory. also my grades can improve.

>>> I want to have a super memory because I commit mistakes, and I often become forgetful.

>>> OR: I would like to have a super precise memory because I tend to commit errors, and become forgetful.

also my grades can improve.

>>> I believe that it can also help me improve my grades in school.

>>> OR: This characteristic can help me improve my grades in school.

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