homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for taking some time to answer the homework. I hope you will be able to be a very good nurse someday. Just continue working hard and one day you will become a successful nurse! Have a good day! I will see you again on our class! ^^,
My dream is to become an Austrailian nurse and get to a high position.
>>> My dream is to become an Australian nurse and have a high position in the hospital I will be working in.
Because I can live a good salary and a comfortable life.
>>> With that, I can have good salary and live a comfortable life.
I think the human live to be happy.
>>> I think the purpose of human life is to be happy.
Yet I don’t know what happiness is because I think I should do what I want to do.
>>> Although I do not know what happiness is because I think I should have freedom to do what I want to do.
after all, my ultimate dream is to live happily.
>>> After all, my ultimate dream is to live happily.
>>> OR After all, my ultimate dream is to live a happy life.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
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