homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I really appreciate that you always do your homework. This is another way for you to develop your skills in English. Please see some corrections and sentence recommendations I have noted here. Thank you! ^^,
The internet provides a lot of information.
>>> CORRECT!
and it can gather various opinions of many people.
>>> And it can gather various opinions of many people.
also we can get the new information.
>>> Also, we can get new information.
it is possible to share information.
>>> It is possible to share information too.
it improve a person’s quality of study.
>>> It improves a person\'s quality of study/education.
also I can see the real time situation.
>>> Also, I can see what is happening in real time.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
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