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2018-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ It was good to share the happy and sad news. Teacher, I have a question. I heard about "step of stepping on the brake pedal, You use step on the accelerator pedal. instead of stopping use step up." you said earlier. Is that right? I'm glad to know new words. I hope you will always be full of good things. :) ★Is playing a video game good for you? In fact, these days, cell phones are so advanced that we are not good at playing video games. The word "video game" itself is pathetic. When I think back to my old memories... I think I played a lot of games. It was fun to be poor but to be with many people. It's not like that now. We only do it on our personal cell phone once in a while. I can't say that games are good, but they're good for stress relief. Of course, this is the case when it is done properly. I want to try the old video game after a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you very much for always writing a great essay. ^^

  am happy to know that you are learning a lot in class. Let\'s continue working together to make sure that you become fluent in English in no time. We can do this. Ajah! kkk. ^^

I agree that video games are good for stress relief but sometimes, people tend to get addicted to it.

I guess the real secret to use it to your advantage is to play video games in moderation.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.

See you again on Friday. :)
~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
It was good to share the happy and sad news. 

>> CORRECT!
Teacher, I have a question.

>> CORRECT!

I heard about \"step of stepping on the brake pedal, You use step on the accelerator pedal. instead of stopping use step up.\"
you said earlier.

>> [Do you mean]: You said in class that I stepped on the accelerator pedal instead of stepping on the brake pedal.

Is that right?

>> CORRECT!
 I\'m glad to know new words.

>> CORRECT!
I hope you will always be full of good things. :)

>> CORRECT!

 ★Is playing a video game good for you?

In fact, these days, cell phones are so advanced that we are not good at playing video games.

>> CORRECT!
The word \"video game\" itself is pathetic.

>> CORRECT!
When I think back to my old memories... I think I played a lot of games.

When I think back to my old memories, I think I played a lot of games.
It was fun to be poor but to be with many people.

>> [Do you mean]: It was fun to be with many people even if people were poor.
It\'s not like that now.

>> CORRECT!
We only do it on our personal cell phone once in a while.

>> CORRECT!
I can\'t say that games are good, but they\'re good for stress relief.

>> CORRECT!
Of course, this is the case when it is done properly.

>> CORRECT!
I want to try the old video game after a long time.

>> CORRECT!

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