HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you very much for always writing a great essay. ^^
am happy to know that you are learning a lot in class. Let\'s continue working together to make sure that you become fluent in English in no time. We can do this. Ajah! kkk. ^^
I agree that video games are good for stress relief but sometimes, people tend to get addicted to it.
I guess the real secret to use it to your advantage is to play video games in moderation.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you again on Friday. :)
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
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It was good to share the happy and sad news.
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Teacher, I have a question.
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I heard about \"step of stepping on the brake pedal, You use step on the accelerator pedal. instead of stopping use step up.\"
you said earlier.
>> [Do you mean]: You said in class that I stepped on the accelerator pedal instead of stepping on the brake pedal.
Is that right?
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I\'m glad to know new words.
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I hope you will always be full of good things. :)
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★Is playing a video game good for you?
In fact, these days, cell phones are so advanced that we are not good at playing video games.
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The word \"video game\" itself is pathetic.
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When I think back to my old memories... I think I played a lot of games.
When I think back to my old memories, I think I played a lot of games.
It was fun to be poor but to be with many people.
>> [Do you mean]: It was fun to be with many people even if people were poor.
It\'s not like that now.
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We only do it on our personal cell phone once in a while.
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I can\'t say that games are good, but they\'re good for stress relief.
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Of course, this is the case when it is done properly.
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I want to try the old video game after a long time.
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