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Hello Jin Young. Thank once again for this one. You\'re diligently doing your homework. Good job! Spending quality time with friends and going out of the city from time to time are really great experiences. Since you\'re very busy with studying, you rarely have time going on short trips. I hope you still find time to unwind. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I usually take a lot of foods when I go to pension for a picnic.
>>> OR: I usually take with me a lot of food whenever I go to a pension for a picnic.
We usually lent a car in order to use trunk because we bought many foods in grocery store where those were very cheap than store in the picnic site.
>>> We usually rent a car in order to use the trunk because we bought many food from the grocery store where food are usually cheaper than those in the picnic site.
foods that we bought include meats, vegetables, beverages, beers and so on.
>>> The food that we buy include meat, vegetables, beverages, beers and so on.
Usually, because pension in the picnic site had barbecue grills, we just brought groceries for cooking.
>>> Because pensions in the picnic site would usually have barbecue grillers, we just buy ingredients to cook.
And, as we almost went to a picnic near sea, buying some seafood like clams and shrimps at there.
>>> In addition, when we go for a picnic near the sea, we buy seafood like clams and shrimps there.
When we cook meats on the barbecue grill, we talked a lot of story on past experience.
>>> While cooking meat on the barbecue grill, we talk stories about our past experiences.
Going to pension was very expensive for us who still were young, but this experiences have been very precious to me.
>>> Going to a pension was quite expensive for us who are still young, but these experiences have been very precious to me.
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