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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for sending this. I appreciate the effort. Western people are definitely friendly towards strangers. But you\'re right, there\'s a certain point of intimacy Westerners can offer towards people or acquaintances.
-T. Beth
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I think Koreans are only hospitable for intimate friends when receiving a visitor.
>>>> OR: I think Koreans are only hospitable towards intimate friends when receiving a visitor.
In my opinion, Koreans have wariness when meeting strangers.
>>>> CORRECT.
And, for them to be intimate together, there have to be a lot of times between them.
>>>> In addition, for them to be intimate with each other, there should be several encounters between them.
However, if making intimate relationship is success, those will invite visitors at their home.
>>>> If making an intimate relationship is successful, they will invite them as visitors at their home.
>>>> OR: If creating an intimate relationship succeeds, they will invite each other at their home.
Also, those serve to visitors with sincerity as if visitors are family with them.
>>>> Moreover, they will serve their visitors with sincerity as if they are a part of their family.
I think Koreans are miserly for strangers, however if they are intimate with strangers once, they can offer a lot of support to those.
>>>> I think Koreans are miserly towards strangers. However, if they become intimate with strangers initially, they can offer them a lot of support.
When compared with west, this culture is very different to west.
>>>> When compared to the West, this culture is very different among Westerners.
I know they are hospitable for strangers, but they have a line that can not be climbed regarding making very close relationship like in Koreans.
>>>> I know they are hospitable to strangers, but they have a line that can not be crossed regarding making very close relationship like in Koreans.
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