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2018-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> When receiving a visitor, are Koreans relatively hospitable? I think Koreans are only hospitable for intimate friends when receiving a visitor. In my opinion, Koreans have wariness when meeting strangers. And, for them to be intimate together, there have to be a lot of times between them. However, if making intimate relationship is success, those will invite visitors at their home. Also, those serve to visitors with sincerity as if visitors are family with them. I think Koreans are miserly for strangers, however if they are intimate with strangers once, they can offer a lot of support to those. When compared with west, this culture is very different to west. I know they are hospitable for strangers, but they have a line that can not be climbed regarding making very close relationship like in Koreans.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for sending this. I appreciate the effort. Western people are definitely friendly towards strangers. But you\'re right, there\'s a certain point of intimacy Westerners can offer towards people or acquaintances.

-T. Beth

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I think Koreans are only hospitable for intimate friends when receiving a visitor.

>>>> OR: I think Koreans are only hospitable towards intimate friends when receiving a visitor.   

In my opinion, Koreans have wariness when meeting strangers.

>>>> CORRECT.    

And, for them to be intimate together, there have to be a lot of times between them.

>>>>  In addition, for them to be intimate with each other, there should be several encounters between them.    

However, if making intimate relationship is success, those will invite visitors at their home.

>>>>  If making an intimate relationship is successful, they will invite them as visitors at their home.

>>>> OR: If creating an intimate relationship succeeds, they will invite each other at their home.    

Also, those serve to visitors with sincerity as if visitors are family with them.

>>>>  Moreover, they will serve their visitors with sincerity as if they are a part of their family.  

I think Koreans are miserly for strangers, however if they are intimate with strangers once, they can offer a lot of support to those.

>>>> I think Koreans are miserly towards strangers. However, if they become intimate with strangers initially, they can offer them a lot of support.      

When compared with west, this culture is very different to west.

>>>> When compared to the West, this culture is very different among Westerners.   

I know they are hospitable for strangers, but they have a line that can not be climbed regarding making very close relationship like in Koreans.

>>>> I know they are hospitable to strangers, but they have a line that can not be crossed regarding making very close relationship like in Koreans.    


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