Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Penny,
Thank you for having the time to do your homework. ^^ I\'m very sorry to hear about what happened that time when you went to work in the hospital that you are with. Sometimes, it happens. ^^ Just don\'t be so affected by it. ^^ I\'m glad that you are alright now.^^
I just want to correct your grammar in your sentences, alright. ^^ This will help you more.
Wow! This is the first time I\'m writing down something that happened to me. ^^ I had an unpleasant thing at the medical center during my shift, so, I ended up crying while working. My feeling was not good all day. I was sorry for you because of my incorrect grammar . You wouldn\'t have been adapting to my English speaking but, don\'t worry about me. I\'m pretty fine compared to yesterday.
HOMEWORK:
Do you ride a bicycle? How useful are bicycles?
Answer in complete sentences.
I think that riding a abicyle is very useful for my health So,I would like to enjoy riding a bicyle by myself at the park that is very close to my house.see you later
Ha ha:)♡
CORRECTIONS:
I think that riding a bicycle is very useful for my health. This is why, I would like to enjoy riding a bicycle by myself at the park that is very close to my house. See you later.
Ha ha:)♡
** Hi Penny, don\'t forget about your word spacing, proper punctuations and correct spelling. ^^ I also corrected your grammar. Please, take note all of the corrections.
Thank you. ^^
See you soon. ^^
T. Alexia
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