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2018-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Hello ggood teacher:)) Wow . It is first time to write it down. I had unpleasant thing regarding my duty at the medical center so,I would end up cring for worktime .My feeling was not good all day, I was sorry for you because of my uncorrect grammer .you wouldn't have been to adapt to my English speaking but,Don't worry about to me. I'm pretty fine rather than yesterday. Here are my answers :))) I think that riding a abicyle is very useful for my health So,I would like to enjoy riding a bicyle by myself at the park that is very close to my house.see you later Ha ha:)♡

강사 첨삭

Hi Penny,


Thank you for having the time to do your homework. ^^ I\'m very sorry to hear about what happened that time when you went to work in the hospital that you are with. Sometimes, it happens. ^^ Just don\'t be so affected by it. ^^ I\'m glad that you are alright now.^^

 

I just want to correct your grammar in your sentences, alright. ^^ This will help you more.


Wow! This is the first time I\'m writing down something that happened to me. ^^ I had an unpleasant thing at the medical center during my shift, so, I ended up crying while working. My feeling was not good all day. I was sorry for you because of my incorrect grammar . You wouldn\'t have been adapting to my English speaking but, don\'t worry about me.  I\'m pretty fine compared to yesterday.


HOMEWORK:


Do you ride a bicycle? How useful are bicycles?
Answer in complete sentences.


I think that riding a abicyle is very useful for my health So,I would like to enjoy riding a bicyle by myself at the park that is very close to my house.see you later
Ha ha:)♡


CORRECTIONS:


I think that riding a bicycle is very useful for my health. This is why, I would like to enjoy riding a bicycle by myself at the park that is very close to my house. See you later. 
Ha ha:)♡


** Hi Penny, don\'t forget about your word spacing, proper punctuations and correct spelling. ^^ I also corrected your grammar. Please, take note all of the corrections.

Thank you. ^^


See you soon. ^^


T. Alexia


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