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Hi Seong Won!
I think dogs are very smart.
You were able to explain their qualities well.
I think you would be a great pet owner.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~Teacher Sharon
I once saw the guide dog helping the blind person walking on the street, and I think that was the smartest thing I\'ve seen an animal do.
>> I once saw a guide dog helping a blind person walk down the street, and I thought that was the smartest thing I\'ve seen an animal do.
The guide dogs have to be very smart and be traind to guide a person.
>> Guide dogs have to be very smart and be trained to guide people.
And the rescue dogs have to be smart and well traind as the guide dog too because they have to help people at the disaster.
>> Rescue dogs also have to be smart and well trained as guide dogs because they have to help people in times of disaster.
Actually, I think the animal which helps people are the smartest animal.
>> Actually, I think animals which help people are the smartest animals.
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