HOMEWORK
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Have you ever not bought a product because you were irritated by the advert?
Yes, I have. When I went to a cosmetic shop, A saleswoman explained the virtue of cosmetics too much to me. I couldn't believe that.
I needed a moisture cream, but i did not buy it.
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Yes, I have.
>> correct!
When I went to a cosmetic shop, A saleswoman explained the virtue of cosmetics too much to me.
>> When I went to a cosmetic shop, a saleswoman explained the benefits of cosmetics too much to me.
I couldn\'t believe that.
>> correct!
I needed a moisture cream, but i did not buy it.
>> I needed a moisture cream, but I did not buy it.
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