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Hello Jin Young. Thanks for this one. I appreciate the effort. I think being too nice is not a good thing. Tolerating everything could be tiring. It\'s a good idea to tell your friends how you feel immediately if a problem happens. I agree with you, prolonging bad feelings could cause a backlash later on. Being honest about how you feel could help strengthen the bond of your friendship.
- T. Beth
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I think I need to be strict for making friendship solidified.
>>>> I think I need to be strict to make my friendship solidified.
>>>> OR: I think I need to be strict to create a stronger friendship.
When my friends ask me to do favor, I would help them with sincerity.
>>>> CORRECT.
But, there are friends who know as if favor is the right when kept continuously.
>>>> But, there are friends who think it is right to keep asking favors continuously.
As these situation arise between me and friends, I tell them my feeling directly.
>>>> COORECT.
>>>> OR: As these situations arise between me and my friends, I tell them how I feel about it directly.
In this situation, those could regard me as unkind person
>>>> In this case, they could regard me a s an unkind person.
[Q. Is the front sentence same with this sentence?? \"In this situation, those could think that I am unkind person\"]
- Yes, they mean the same.
However, unpleasant feeling was kept for a short time in comparison that the bigger event will arise later.
>>>> However, unpleasant feelings should be kept for a short time rather than causing a big backlash later.
If I don\'t tell friends my feeling, the bigger conflict can arise between me and friends.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: If I don\'t tell friends my feelings immediately, the bigger conflict could arise between us at a later time.
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