homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [Name]!
It was such a delight talking to you today.
You seem like a very interesting person.
We will work hard to improve your English skills.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
I\'ll call you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
today, I had the first class with Sharon.
>> I had my first class with Sharon today.
I was so happy to Sharon\'s voice.
>> I was so happy to hear Sharon\'s voice.
because her voice took up a positive attitude.
>> Her voice took on a positive attitude.
I will practice very hard about english class with sharon.
>> I will practice my English skills very hard with Sharon.
please help me sharon.
>> Please help me, Sharon.
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