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2018-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think my friend do the most overreaction thing with my school uniform's skirt that I ever seen. Our school uniform's skirt has the zipper so the girls can open and close the pocket. And I have a habit to open the zipper and put my hands in the pocket. My friend can't let me do that thing so she always yaff at me to zip the pocket and don't put my hand in the pocket. and beat my back. Even my mother don't talk about my hands which is in my unzipped pocket.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You really have skills when it come to storytelling.

I can imagine your friend\'s reactions through your words.

I hope you would find a way to develop your talent.

You have a lot of potential.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think my friend do the most overreaction thing with my school uniform\'s skirt that I ever seen.
>> I think the biggest overreaction I have ever seen was that of my friend reacting to my school uniform skirt.
Our school uniform\'s skirt has the zipper so the girls can open and close the pocket.
>> Our school uniform\'s skirt has a zipper so girls can open and close the pocket.
And I have a habit to open the zipper and put my hands in the pocket.
>> I have a habit of opening the zipper and putting my hands in the pocket.
My friend can\'t let me do that thing so she always yaff at me to zip the pocket and don\'t put my hand in the pocket. and beat my back.
>> My friend doesn\'t like me doing this so she always yells at me to zip the pocket up and not put my hand in the pocket.

and beat my back.

>> After this, she would hit my back
Even my mother don\'t talk about my hands which is in my unzipped pocket.

>> Even my mother doesn\'t talk about my hands being in my unzipped pocket.

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