Homework.
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Jean
1. make it on time
2. attend the
3. head out
4. about to
5. focused on
I just try hard to make it on time so it accomplished to work in a factory.
>> I just try hard to make it on time so I won\'t get in trouble at work.
I attended the meeting for the prepation of work.
>> correct
I often head out to the yard of my apartment to make my body refreshed.
>> correct
It\'s the subject about to work in a factory.
>> The subject is about working in a factory.
When I was in university I just focused on the subject of study.
>> or: I just focused on the subject of study when I was in university.
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