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2018-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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What is your biggest goal in life? And how do you plan to achieve that goal? My biggest goal in life is to travel around the world. I love to travel because I can make a lot of happy memories. Whenever I have spare time, I tend to go on a trip. And I write a list of countries that can go this year or next year and note the country\'s information to achieve my goal.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Thank you for answering the homework I gave you last time. I really appreciate it. I like the goal you mentioned since I also want to travel to different countries if I will be given a chance. Anyway, I just corrected the last sentence that you wrote so you can check on it. ^^


Again, thank you. Have a good night! See you tomorrow!


~ Teacher Gina



My biggest goal in life is to travel around the world. I love to travel because I can make a lot of happy memories. Whenever I have spare time, I tend to go on a trip. And I write a list of countries that can go this year or next year and note the country\'s information to achieve my goal.


>> My biggest goal in life is to travel around the world. I love to travel because I can make a lot of happy memories. Whenever I have spare time, I tend to go on a trip. And I write a list of countries that I want to go to this year or next year and note the country\'s information to prepare for my goal.


>> Or: My biggest goal in life is to travel around the world. I love to travel because I can make a lot of happy memories. Whenever I have spare time, I tend to go on a trip. And I write a list of the countries I want to visit this year or next year and note the country\'s information to prepare in achieving my goal.

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